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I like the warmth and authenticity of your current version, but it’s longer than it needs to be and some of the wording (“insurmountably better”) feels a bit awkward. I’d also highlight what makes you different: you’re an experienced host who personally cares about your guests.

Here’s how I would rewrite it:

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Hello and welcome!

I’m Bonnie, owner of Personal Touch Vacation Rentals. I moved to Utah from California more than 30 years ago and fell in love with the mountains, changing seasons, and endless outdoor adventures. After a rewarding 35-year career as a Newborn/Pediatric Flight Nurse, I now devote my time to managing my vacation rentals.

I personally own and manage properties in Park City, Curaçao, and Maui, and I take pride in providing the kind of attentive, personalized service that larger management companies often can’t offer. As a longtime vacation rental host, I’ve had the pleasure of welcoming guests from around the world and have earned consistently outstanding reviews by treating every guest the way I’d want to be treated.

Whether you’re visiting for skiing, hiking, diving, or simply to relax, my goal is to provide a comfortable, well-appointed home and make your vacation as easy and enjoyable as possible.

Thank you for considering my condo. I hope to have the opportunity to host you and help make your Park City vacation a memorable one!

As an avid skier, I chose Sundial Lodge because it offers one of the best ski-in/ski-out locations in Park City without feeling like a large, impersonal hotel. Everything is incredibly convenient—from your condo to the lobby, ski lockers, and gondolas—so you spend less time navigating hallways and more time enjoying the mountain.

What I love most is Sundial’s warm, welcoming atmosphere. It feels like a mountain lodge rather than a resort hotel. Over the years, I’ve made my condo a place I’d love to stay myself, with a luxurious king bed, premium bedding, designer finishes, and thoughtful touches that make it feel like a true mountain retreat.

One of my favorite moments is enjoying coffee on the balcony while watching the gondolas start running each morning. It’s the perfect way to begin a ski day, and if you’re lucky, you might even spot a moose wandering through the village below.

After a day on the slopes, curl up by the fireplace, relax with a glass of wine, and enjoy a cozy evening. Whether you’re here for a romantic getaway or a family ski vacation, I hope you’ll love Sundial Lodge as much as I do. purchased this property because I love to ski and the Sundial Lodge is one of the few ski in ski out properties that doesn't feel like a hotel. It's not only easy to get to the gondola from the front door, but its easy to get from your room to the front door without getting lost in the maze of a big hotel. The Sundial Lodge has a cozy, warm, personal feel to it and I have made my unit different from the rest with my own personal taste, a King size bed, luxurious bedding! The balcony view is incredible and the sound of the gondola in the morning is sure to get you excited for the day. There have been occasional moose sightings from the balcony also!
Turn the fireplace on and it can be a romantic vacation for two or a cozy gathering for a small family. You will love it!

More Than a Typical Rental

Because this studio was originally my own mountain home during the off-season, it has a true pride-of-ownership feel. I’ve furnished and stocked it with the same attention to detail I would want in my own home.

The kitchen is exceptionally well equipped. You’ll find quality cookware, both Keurig (with coffee pods) and drip coffee maker (with coffee). a Brita water filter, basic spices, food storage containers, and many everyday essentials.

To make packing easier, I also provide paper products, laundry detergent, trash bags, hand soap, lotion, a hair dryer, and other thoughtful touches to help you settle in and enjoy your stay.

Occasionally, previous guests leave unopened non-perishable items that you’re welcome to enjoy.